I'm Not Always Good

[mokuyoubi]

Okay, now that I have finished all my art, and the mix (though I still need to write up *why* I chose the songs, but that shouldn't take more than 15-20 minutes), and I have finished making beta-ing changes to my own fic, I am going to try to add some of the scenes I wanted to, and change one that really bothers me. Even if I can't finish them, I can post it as is, but with the week we have before posting, I think I can get a few changes made.
Soooo...I'm asking for a little help from anyone on my flist who *has not* read my story but would be willing to do so very quickly. I want a fresh perspective on some of the scenes I'm thinking of changing/adding. It's already been betaed, so I don't really need that (unless you catch any glaring errors), but mainly I want someone who can tell me whether they like version a or b better in a few places. If you're able to do that in the next couple of days, please let me know!

Also, can BBB just be over so I can work on the 82 other fic ideas I have, particularly the ones I got while on vacation...

Meanwhile, I miss Sweden so hard D: Particularly the awesome people there...

Comments

[redorchids.livejournal.com]

We miss you too. <3333

[moku-youbi.livejournal.com]

<3

I'm still sort of lame and jetlagged, but would you be up to talking on Monday? Then I can tell you all about the fic! In the meantime, I'll send you Gabe/William/Bden porn as soon as I get it typed up :D

[redorchids.livejournal.com]

I'd love to. Come find me. I'll probably be online most of the day. :D

[roebling.livejournal.com]

hey! I'm kind of a lurker but I'm a super fast reader and I am in need of distraction, so I'd be glad to read your fic for you.

[moku-youbi.livejournal.com]

cool! I need to make a few notes in it and still type up a couple of the scenes (I wrote them longhand on the plane), but then I'll send it your way :D

[roebling.livejournal.com]

cool :) my email address is mimetic@gmail.com (I guess you would need that!)

[intricate-life.livejournal.com]

I kind of miss you too. It was beyond awesome to have some more people to discuss all these fun stuff. I've looked into bus tickets to columbus already, and as long as it works out with my sister (and if I'm still welcome), i'll be taking a trip mid-july :D
you can send me the fic if you want, but i can't promise to have time to read it. stupid report for school is kicking my ass. email: intricate dot life7 at gmail dot com

[moku-youbi.livejournal.com]

dude, of *course* you're still welcome. Mid-July is my birthday (the 19th). And if you let me know a few weeks ahead of time, I can request off work. I work overnights, so it just makes it easier to spend time with you. So yeah, just let us know when. And I'll send you fic in a bit :D You can get to it, or not, no problem.

[nenafay.livejournal.com]

no it's not... :)
(sorry, couldn't resist)

[moku-youbi.livejournal.com]

I love you, Nena Fay :D

[roga.livejournal.com]

Hey! I've read the early draft, but if you still want more input then I can do it tomorrow (=Sunday), just email it if you want.

[moku-youbi.livejournal.com]

I got someone to look over it. I really wanted a fresh perspective, but thank you :D

[inteligrrl.livejournal.com]

Hey, I just wanted to apologize for not getting back to you with a corrected draft before your trip. Finals hit me like a ton of bricks and I wasn't able to get back to it. If it helps I only had a few big notes, most of which I'm sure you've ironed out by now.

Sorry again, but I'm glad you had a good trip.