Anyone online?

I'm working on a potential fic for wave 2 of BBB, but it's an AU set in a 'verse that probably most people won't be familiar with, and I'm worried that it's either way too confusing or way too exposition-y. So, yeah, it's short, but it'd be cool if someone unfamiliar with the verse could look it over for me and see if it makes any sense/is super boring/is pointless/whatever. Hit me here, or on gmail chat :D

Got a couple offers now, yay!