Beta?

Ergh. I'm just going to ask this way, because I never can tell who's going to be able to help, and I hate emailing out of the blue, because that's so presumptuous of me, ne? So from now on I'm just going to post when I need a beta.

Just about finished with the Jon/Spencer/Ryan Elf!fic prequel. Roughly 35,000 words. I'd like a quick beta of grammar stuff. If you're interested, please respond here and I'll take the first one or two responses.
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Thanks!