mokuyoubi: (SteveJoe Pensive)
Okay, now that I have finished all my art, and the mix (though I still need to write up *why* I chose the songs, but that shouldn't take more than 15-20 minutes), and I have finished making beta-ing changes to my own fic, I am going to try to add some of the scenes I wanted to, and change one that really bothers me. Even if I can't finish them, I can post it as is, but with the week we have before posting, I think I can get a few changes made.
Soooo...I'm asking for a little help from anyone on my flist who *has not* read my story but would be willing to do so very quickly. I want a fresh perspective on some of the scenes I'm thinking of changing/adding. It's already been betaed, so I don't really need that (unless you catch any glaring errors), but mainly I want someone who can tell me whether they like version a or b better in a few places. If you're able to do that in the next couple of days, please let me know!

Also, can BBB just be over so I can work on the 82 other fic ideas I have, particularly the ones I got while on vacation...

Meanwhile, I miss Sweden so hard D: Particularly the awesome people there...
mokuyoubi: (Emokid)
Alright. I know some of you have betaed for me in the past, but this is sort of a huge undertaking, and I'd totally understand if you didn't feel up to it again. So. That's why I'm posting here. That way you can offer your services if you want, rather than having me pester you with something you can't/don't want to do.

I'm about to wrap up with my BBB fic, which is currently at 83k. I'm anticipating another 10k to wrap it up, but I'd really like to have any potential betas now, because one thing I'm struggling with is where to end this beast, and I'd like input on that. Plus, this is probably going to take a little while to get through.

The rough draft doesn't have to be in until the end of April (and like, srsly, why does BBB go on so long? For 20k. *shrugs*) and then I don't need the final draft for another month after that, so there's plenty of time. I'd like someone who could go over it now for general spelling/grammar errors and typos, and for some feedback on the ending, and then to go over it again a few weeks later to read through all the changes I've made, and to beta the ending. Also could use some help with the title, since that's always my weakest point.

If you're up to it, let me know here, and I'll send the fic your way.

General stuff about the fic:
Mormon Brendon AU. Essentially a what-if scenario where the only difference in the universe is that Brendon never met Spencer and Ryan in high school.
Pairings: Ryan/Brendon, Jon/Spencer, Jon/Brendon, Jon/Spencer/Brendon, Ryan/Spencer, Panic GSF
Lots of Mormon/religious angst, romantic angst, drug use, more angst, oh, and angst. And lots of sex.


Jan. 18th, 2009 09:41 pm
mokuyoubi: (SteveJoe Pensive)
Ergh. I'm just going to ask this way, because I never can tell who's going to be able to help, and I hate emailing out of the blue, because that's so presumptuous of me, ne? So from now on I'm just going to post when I need a beta.

Just about finished with the Jon/Spencer/Ryan Elf!fic prequel. Roughly 35,000 words. I'd like a quick beta of grammar stuff. If you're interested, please respond here and I'll take the first one or two responses.
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